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the diagrams below show the Marlton Gallery before and after it was renovated

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The diagrams illustrate changes taken place in the Marlton gallery before and after it was updated. In general, it is quite clear that Marlton galley has undergone a plethora of changes. It is particularly significant that the roof of the building which was used for gardening now is transformed the third floor of the construction. In detail, it goes without saying that the whole roof garden was eliminated in order to build a contemporary stage with more rooms. On this third floor, an up-to-date facility namely education Centre and media room which was originally on the second floor were separated by an extended lift. Moved to the second floor, as mentioned, media room used to be a facility of this stage, on the contrary, it was afterward given place for special exhibition while the coffee shop on the right of the lift stayed unchanged. Moreover, the first floor witnessed a number of renovations, commencing with special exhibition which was replaced with parking lot. Furthermore, one third the gift shop space was transformed into stairs while half of the front desk space was occupied by the coat room after modernization

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