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This graph shows the prediction of India and China population from the year of 2000 to 2050. At the bot

This graph shows the prediction of India and China population from the year of 2000 to 2050. At the bot 0nLn3
This graph shows the prediction of India and China population from the year of 2000 to 2050. At the bottom it represents the year and at the right it represents number of the population by billion. As you can see from this graph, India population had been rising steady, while China population decrease at last. The prediction said that in the year of 2030 both of the country would have the same amount of population at about 1. 45 billion people. Then China population would slowly decreases and Indian population would keep growing but with the slower rate. Finally in the year of 2050, the graph shows that Indian population would be at 1. 6 billion people and China population would be 1. 4 billion people with 0. 2 billion different. In the beginning of 2000 China has more population at 1. 25 billion and Indian only at 1 billion but now India has more population than China.
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the prediction of India and China
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population
from the
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of 2000 to 2050. At the bottom it represents the
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year
and at the right it represents number of the
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population
by
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billion
. As you can
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see
from this graph, India
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population
had been rising steady, while China
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population
decrease at last. The prediction said that in the
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year
of 2030 both of the country would have the same amount of
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population
at about 1. 45
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billion
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people
. Then China
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would
slowly
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decreases
and Indian
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would
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keep
growing
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with the slower rate.
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Finally
in the
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of 2050, the graph
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that Indian
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would be at 1. 6
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billion
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people
and China
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would be 1. 4
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people
with 0. 2
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. In the beginning of 2000 China has more
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at 1. 25
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and Indian
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at 1
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India has more
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