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The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making suger from suger cane.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making suger from suger cane. VlRB3
The diagram represrents the process that how suger is made from sugercanes. Overall, there are total seven steps to produce suger. first step is growing sugercanes whereas, the last step is drying and cooling the final product after all the process had been done. The first step involves grow sugercanes in the farmland for 12-18 months once the suger canes are ready the next step is to harvest the ready sugercanes. This work can be done by the machines or either by mannual labour. Therafter crushing process takes place in which juice is extract from the suger canes and then purifying juice in limestone filter. After that pure juice has put in the evaporator where the juice bacomes syrup by the heat the penulitmate step is to separates suger crystals from syrup in the centrifuge. Finally, after drying and cooling process final product is ready in the form of suger.
The diagram
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represrents
the
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process
that how
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suger
is made
from
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sugercanes
.
Overall
, there are total seven
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steps
to produce
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suger
.
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first
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step
is growing
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sugercanes
whereas, the last
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step
is drying and cooling the final product
after all
the
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process
had
been done
. The
first
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step
involves grow
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sugercanes
in the farmland for 12-18 months once the
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suger
canes are ready the
next
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step
is to harvest the ready
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sugercanes
. This work can
be done
by the machines or either by
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mannual
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labour
.
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Therafter
crushing
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process
takes place in which
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juice
is extract from the
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suger
canes and then purifying
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juice
in limestone filter.
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After
that pure
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juice
has put in the evaporator where the
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juice
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bacomes
syrup by the heat the
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penulitmate
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step
is to separates
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suger
crystals from syrup in the centrifuge.
Finally
, after drying and cooling
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final product is ready in the form of
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suger
.
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