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The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart highlights the reasons which makes working at home more preferable among the workers along with a tabular chart comparing the hours of work done at home by male and female worker in the year 2019. Overall, it can be clearly seen that, the major reason to choose work from home is to save money along with considerable reasons to more productivity and easier childcare. Moreover, males work more hours from home than females per week. In detail, larger percentage of people prefer to work from home in order to save money. Male workers comprises of larger percentage than female workers to work from home so as to save money and more productivity. However, there is a significant difference between women and men workers to work from home to ensure easier childcare. On the other hand, there is massive difference in the working hours of men and women at home. 3 out of every female work not more than 10 hours per week at home whereas it is completely opposite in case of men as approximately 4/5th of men work more than 30 hours per week at home.
The bar chart highlights the reasons which
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makes
working at home more preferable among the
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workers
along with a tabular chart comparing the
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hours
of
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work
done at home by male and
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female
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worker
in the year 2019.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that, the major reason to choose
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work
from home is to save money along with considerable reasons to more productivity and easier childcare.
Moreover
, males
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work
more
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hours
from home than
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females
per week.

In detail, larger percentage of
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people
prefer to
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work
from home in order to save money. Male
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workers
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comprises of
larger percentage than
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female
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workers
to
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work
from home
‘So as to’ expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using “to”
so as to
save money and more productivity.
However
, there is a significant difference between women and
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men
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workers
to
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work
from home to ensure easier childcare.

On the other hand
, there is massive difference in the working
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hours
of
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men
and women at home. 3 out of every
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female
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work
not more than 10
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hours
per week at home whereas it is completely opposite in case of
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men
as approximately 4/5th of
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men
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work
more than 30
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hours
per week at home.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the main reasons workers chose to work from home and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2019.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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