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The chart provide information on the percentage of people eating fruit and vegetables

The chart provide information on the percentage of people eating fruit and vegetables in five portions each day over a period of 8 years from 2001 to 2008 in the UK. It can be grouped into men, women and children. Overall, the trend has a moderate rise in the percentage. However, the exception of this is women that has ultimately a slight fall in the proportion of people who consume fruit and vegetables. The figure is represented by percentage. The percentage of women eating fruit and vegetables was the highest since the beginning of 2000s to the 2008s. Respectively, in men the percentage was higher than in children in range from 2001 to 2008. However, it had been seen that all three groups had a constant rise in the percentage of people eating healthy food. The exception of this trend was women group that had a slow decrease in the percentage.
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eating fruit and vegetables in five portions each day over a period of 8 years from 2001 to 2008 in the UK. It can
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men
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women
and children.
Overall
, the trend has a moderate rise in the
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.
However
, the
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exception of
this is
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women
that has
ultimately
a slight fall in the proportion of
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people
who consume fruit and vegetables. The figure
is represented
by percentage.

The
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percentage
of
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women
eating fruit and vegetables was the highest since the beginning of 2000s to the 2008s.
Respectively
, in
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men
the
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percentage
was higher than in children in range from 2001 to 2008.
However
, it had been
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seen
that all three groups had a constant rise in the
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percentage
of
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people
eating healthy food. The
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exception of
this trend was
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women
group that had a slow decrease in the
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IELTS academic The chart provide information on the percentage of people eating fruit and vegetables

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151 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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