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The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

This graphic, divided into five age groups, shows which portion of British citizens donate money to benefaction in the years 1990 and 2010. Some contrast and significant features will be next presented. It is possibly to note that in the year 1990 the highest percentage of people giving funds to charity was reached by the third group, which is between thirty-six and fifty years. This percentage was almost forty-five percent, while in the year 2010 for the same age range it was a ten percent lower than this. In the contrary, the higher portion in the year 2010 belonged to people between fifty-one and sixty-five years old, which was about four to ten. Instead, the group with the lowest percentages for both years was the first one, people from eighteen to twenty-five years old. In the year 1990 this amount was way higher though, arriving to more than fifteen percent, whereas in 2010 it was about five percent.
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1990 the highest percentage of
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by the third group, which is between thirty-six and fifty years. This percentage was almost forty-five
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2010 for the same age range it was a ten
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lower than this. In the contrary, the higher portion in the
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2010 belonged to
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, which was about four to ten.

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from eighteen to twenty-five years
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1990 this amount was way higher though, arriving to more than fifteen
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the 1990 and 2010.

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