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The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. r800N
The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. ! The two pictures compare the current layout of the ground floor of a house with a plan to redesign the same living space. We can see that the new design proposal involves making a number of changes to the ground floor of the house, mainly in the central hall area. There are no plans to change external walls or entrances. The most noticeable change from the existing to the proposed floor plan is that there will no longer be a separate hall area when the building work has been done. This will be achieved by removing the internal wall and door between the hall and living room, along with the current staircase and under-stair storage cupboard. With no separate hall area, the proposed living room will also contain the staircase to the first floor. To replace the current straight staircase, a new set of winding stairs will be installed in the corner of the living room. The internal door between the hall and kitchen will also be replaced with double doors connecting the kitchen with the new living room. Finally, the planned building work will also include the installation of some kitchen furniture.
The diagrams below
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show
the existing ground
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floor
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plan
of a
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house
and a proposed
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plan
for
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some
building

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work
. !

The two pictures compare the
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current
layout of the ground
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floor
of a
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house
with a
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plan
to redesign the

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same
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living
space.

We can
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see
that the new design proposal involves making a number of
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changes
to the ground
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floor
of the

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house
,
mainly
in the central
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hall
area. There are no
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plans
to
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change
external walls or entrances.

The most noticeable
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change
from the existing to the proposed
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floor
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plan
is that there will no longer be a

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separate
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hall
area when the building work has
been done
. This will
be achieved
by removing the
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internal


wall and door between the
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hall
and
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living
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room
, along with the
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current
staircase and under-stair storage

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cupboard
. With no separate
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hall
area, the proposed
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living
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room
will
also
contain the staircase to the
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first


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floor
.

To replace the
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current
straight staircase, a new set of winding stairs will
be installed
in the corner of the

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living
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room
. The internal door between the
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hall
and kitchen will
also
be replaced
with double
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doors


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connecting
the kitchen with the new
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living
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room
.
Finally
, the planned building work will
also
include

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the
installation of
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some
kitchen furniture.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work.

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