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The diagram evaluates the maximum number of elephants' population in a range of Asian countries over a period of seven years from 1997 to 2004. overall, during seven days from 1997 to 2004 the highest figure was achieved by India, while the least value gained by China. India and Myanmar were two countries where elephants' population was the highest among other seven countries. during seven years India experienced a marked fall in the number of population from 10, 000 in 1997 to 2004. On the other hand, in Malaysia and Thailand elephants' population changed considerably so that more than laves of population declined. Vietnam, Myanmar and Sir Lanka avoided such heavy losses, while China lost more than half of its population. in Laos the numbers in two years stayed the same. on the contrary, in Cambodia figure showed a slightly increase during these years.
The diagram evaluates the maximum number of elephants'
population
in a range of Asian countries over a period of seven years from 1997 to 2004.
overall
, during seven days from 1997 to 2004 the highest figure
was achieved
by India, while the least value gained by China. India and Myanmar were two countries where elephants'
population
was the highest among other seven countries.
during
seven years India experienced a marked fall in the number of
population
from 10, 000 in 1997 to 2004.
On the other hand
, in Malaysia and Thailand elephants'
population
changed
considerably
so
that more than laves of
population
declined. Vietnam, Myanmar and Sir Lanka avoided such heavy losses, while China lost more than half of its
population
.
in
Laos the numbers in two years stayed the same.
on
the contrary, in Cambodia figure
showed
a
slightly increase
during these years.
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