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The diagrams below show the development of the horse over the period of 40 million years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the development of the horse over the period of 40 million years. VBrxD
The given diagram highlights the major changes during the horse's 40-million-year evolution. Overall, the horse's evolution is marked by significant changes in foot bone structure and the size of this species, step-by-step transforming a small mammal into the modern horse. The Eohippus living 40 million years ago bears a characteristic of a 4-toe foot bone. The number of toes is reduced by one during the next 10-million-year evolution, forming a 3-toe foot bone with the middle toe growing in terms of size which characterizes the Mesohippus. The Merychippus, the third species of the horse's evolution, has a middle toe continuing to significantly evolve, almost double in size compared with other toes. The last 15-million-year evolution witnesses a radical change in the horse's foot bone structure when the 3-toe foot completely transforms into the hoof. This evolution also witnesses a significant increase in the size of the horse. In tandem, only Eohippus and Mesohippus bear the characteristic of the C-shaped backbone while Merychippus is characterized by the almost-flat backbone, resembling that of the modern horse. The 40-million-year evolution also witnesses the noticeable growth of mane and tail, which distinguishes the modern horse from its mammal ancestor, Eohippus.
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in foot
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structure and the
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of this species, step-by-step transforming a
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mammal into the modern horse.

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living 40 million years ago bears a characteristic of a 4-toe foot
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10-million-year
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, forming a 3-toe foot
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with the middle toe growing in terms of
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size
which characterizes the
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Mesohippus
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, the third species of the
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, has a middle toe continuing to
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evolve, almost double in
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compared with other toes.
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witnesses a radical
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foot
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structure when the 3-toe foot completely transforms into the hoof.

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witnesses a significant increase in the
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of the horse. In tandem,
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Eohippus
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bear the characteristic of the C-shaped backbone while
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