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The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they receive from employers.

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they receive from employers. e5RYG
the information regarding the causes for education among children of various ages 26 to 49 and the quality of workers support is depicted by the bar graph. overall, minimum students prefer studies for interest in first age group child learn studies for career showed a downward trend but who prefer education for interest shows an upward trend. At a fleeting glance, the most highlighting feature of the graph is that the maximum ratio of children was 70% age 49 who prefer to learn study for interest. under26 age group students were 80% who learn studies for a career it was decreased to 70 %in 26 to 29 age. in age, 30 to 49 people were 10% to 60% who learn study for a career. Moreover, the percentile, student age 26 to 49 was 10% TO 40% Who prefer education for interest. additionally, the amount of support age under 26 was approximately 70% employees but it was declined to 50% in age 26 to 29. In addition, the percentile of the amount of support was 30 to 50% who workers time off and help with fees in age 30 to 49 respectively.
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26 to 49 and the quality of workers support
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group child
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for career
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a downward trend
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who
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prefer
education for
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interest
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At a fleeting glance, the most highlighting feature of the graph is that the maximum ratio of children was 70%
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age
49
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who
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prefer
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learn
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study
for
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interest
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under26
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age
group students were 80%
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who
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learn
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studies
for a career it
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, 30 to 49
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were 10% to 60%
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who
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learn
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study
for a career.

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, the percentile, student
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age
26 to 49 was 10% TO 40%
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prefer
education for
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interest
.
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additionally
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age
under 26 was approximately 70% employees
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it
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26 to 29.
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who
workers time off and
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help
with fees in
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age
30 to 49
respectively
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IELTS academic The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they receive from employers.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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