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The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. RNyLY
The graph provides the information regarding the quantity of theft per thousand vehicles in Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada. Overall, theft cases in Great Britain was noticeably higher than other countries while this rate increased significantly in Sweden. As is signified in the illustration, roughly 17 transportation per thousands were stolen in Great Britain while this rate was 6 to 8 every thousands in France, Sweden and Canada. Automobile burglary continued till 1993 with 20 vehicles per thousand. Motor vehicle theft dipped sharply in 1994 in Great Britain but rose again to 20 vehicles in 1997. With some minor fluctuation, robbery in France and Canada remained consistent throught the years. On the other hand, stealing of automobile surged in Sweden. The stealing rose significantly from nearly 8 vehicles to 14 vehicles per thousand in 1999. -7
The graph provides the information regarding the quantity of theft per thousand
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Overall
, theft cases in
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Great
Britain was
noticeably
higher than other countries while this rate increased
significantly
in Sweden.

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is signified
in the illustration, roughly 17 transportation per thousands
were stolen
in
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Great
Britain while this rate was 6 to 8 every
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thousands
in France, Sweden and Canada. Automobile burglary continued till 1993 with 20
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vehicles
per thousand. Motor
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vehicle
theft dipped
sharply
in 1994 in
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Great
Britain
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but
rose again to 20
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vehicles
in 1997. With
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some
minor fluctuation, robbery in France and Canada remained consistent
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throught
the years.

On the other hand
, stealing of automobile surged in Sweden. The stealing rose
significantly
from
nearly
8
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vehicles
to 14
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vehicles
per thousand in 1999. -7

IELTS academic The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999.

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