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The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 , and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The internation about USA marriage and divorce rates from 1970 to 2000 whereas, the martial status of adult Americans in two of the years is given by bar charts. It can be clearly seen that number of marriages in the USA were both exact similar with 2. 5 millions in year 1970 and 1980, it followed by year 1990 with approximately 2. 3 millions. In 2000, marriages were lowest with 2 millions while, in divorces were in 1970 with 1 millions. In 1980 had been increased with about 1. 3 millions. In year 1990 and 2000 were slight decrease in divorces with near about 1millions respectively.
The internation about USA marriage and divorce rates from 1970 to 2000 whereas, the martial status of adult Americans in two of the years is
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IELTS academic The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

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