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The graph compares the proportion of energy which was produced from coal in four different countries between 1995 and 2010.

The graph compares the proportion of energy which was produced from coal in four different countries between 1995 and 2010. Overall, it can be seen the amount of energy which was produced from coal declined in all four countries over the given period. On one hand, the production of energy from cola was the highest in Denmark in 2002 at about ----------, then this figure dropped sharply to 10 in 2010, which is lowsest production level in the 2020. Germany followed a simliar trend, falling from around 55 Milion in 2002 to approximately 13 Million in 2010. One the other hand, there was a slight fall in the amount of energy produced from coal in Swedem from 50 to 25, which was the greatest in 2010. Simliarly, the prodcued energy from coal in Germany stood at 20, then this figure gradually declined ro 18 in the end of given period.
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the amount of
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energy
which
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from coal declined in all four countries over the
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given
period.

On one hand, the production of
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from cola was the highest in Denmark in 2002 at about ----------, then this figure dropped
sharply
to 10 in 2010, which is
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lowsest
production level in the 2020.

Germany followed a
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simliar
trend, falling from around 55
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Milion
in 2002 to approximately 13 Million in 2010.

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produced from coal in
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Swedem
from 50 to 25, which was the greatest in 2010.

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, the
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prodcued
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from coal in Germany stood at 20, then this figure
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18 in the
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IELTS academic The graph compares the proportion of energy which was produced from coal in four different countries between 1995 and 2010.

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6 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
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