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The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now.

The maps show changes in a city in 1950 and now. bK3g

The given maps illustrate a number of changes taking place in a city between 1950 and present day. Overall, the most significant modification after nearly 70 years is the expansion of residential area. In addition, the river and the airport witness no changes in their position. It can be noticed that the population of the city now is ten times higher than that in 1950, which is also directly proportional to the size of residential area after 70 years. Besides, the business district in the middle of the city has been expanded to the South. At present, a new lake along the river has also appeared. A new small bridge has been erected in the East of the river, which was opposite the construction of a dam. Although the airport witnesses no changes in the position, its size has been increased nearly three-fold. To the South of the river, the government building has been reduced in size, and a bigger one has been built in the bottom of the city.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps illustrate a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 taking place in a city between 1950 and present day.

Overall
, the most significant modification after nearly
 70 years is the expansion of residential area. In addition
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 and the airport witness no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in their position.

It can be noticed
 that the population of the city This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 is ten times higher than that in 1950, which is also
directly
 proportional to the size of residential area after 70 years. Besides
, the business district in the middle of the city has been expanded
 to the South. At present, a new lake along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 has also
 appeared.

A new This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 bridge has been erected
 in the East of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, which was opposite the construction of a dam. Although the airport witnesses no This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the position, its size has been increased
nearly
 three-fold. To the South of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 building has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in size, and a bigger one has been built
 in the bottom of the city. 