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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. EjgR

This is the design of the wave energy machine and where this machine is located. There are couple of options on where to install this machine. In the first diagram of wave energy machine there are couple of things that i should namely address and explain about the functionality of this machine on how it generates electricity. In this machine the airflow comes in from the top to the turbines present. and the wave directions that are coming in the bottom are controlled and that enter the water chamber, there are namely 2 chambers inside there is a airflow chamber in the top which has turbines in that and the bottom chamber has the water levels which will help control the wave directions with the airflow the water levels rise wiht the help of the turbines and then the electricity is generated. There are 2 types of wave energy machines that are installed, one is installed in a place where large waves high output is frequent and they have high installation charges and another one is installed at a place near to the small waves with low output and for this the installation is also low and between these two machines using those waves the electricity is generated.

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 with low output and for this the installation is also
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