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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The aforementioned pictures depict the process of a wave-energy machine and its location for installation. At a glance, those are three steps involved in producing electricity from wave-energy. In addition, the location is matter. the further the location from the beach, the higher the installation costs as well as the output. To begin with, wave flows to the machine raises the water levels. As the water levels increases, the air pressure might be affected causing the flowing of air in the chambers. This airflow turns the turbine creating and produce energy for the electricity generator. Finally, electricity is produced and transmitted to the houses and industries. The location must be considered as it will affect the costs and the output. Near the beach, the wave is small which means the output will be low. However, the installation costs are also low. Meanwhile, when the machine is located far from the beach, the costs worth for the high output because of the larger waves.

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 as the output.

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begin
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affected
 causing the flowing of air in the chambers. This airflow turns the turbine creating and produce energy for the electricity generator. Finally
, electricity is produced
 and transmitted to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and industries.

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location
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small
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