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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet every day from 2003-2006

The given bar illustrates the proportion of citizens of various age groups in the UK who used internet from 2003-2006Overall, it is clearly seen that, 16-24 age group were used internet maximum, whereas 65+ age group were minimum user of internet. Looking at the graph in more detail, In 2003 80 percent adult of 16 -24 age group used internet in daily basic and this figure remained same in 2004, while 65+ age group didn't use internet in 2003. 25-44 Age group and 45-54 age group 50 percent and 60 percent netizen used internet daily respectively in 2003. 30 percent adult from 55-64 age group used internet everyday in 2003. The percentage of adults of 65 + age group was between 18 and 20 percent by 2006.
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in the UK who
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internet from 2003-2006Overall, it is
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that, 16-24
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were
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internet maximum, whereas 65+
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were minimum user of internet.

Looking at the graph in more detail, In 2003 80
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adult of 16 -24
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internet in daily basic and this figure remained same in 2004, while 65+
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didn't
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internet in 2003. 25-44
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Age
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and 45-54
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50
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and 60
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netizen
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internet daily
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adult from 55-64
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internet everyday in 2003. The percentage of adults of 65 +
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was between 18 and 20
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by 2006.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet every day from 2003-2006

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