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The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001. QVrW1
The maps illustrate the considerable changes that occurred in Felixstone in the UK over the course of 34 years, from 1967 to 2001. Overall, it is clear that the area was completely transformed with the addition of wind turbines and apartments; however, the golf course, dunes, and some trees remain unchanged. The most visible and striking difference is that the farmland has been industrialized to make room for other entertainment facilities such as a swimming pool, a hotel, and tennis courts. One of the shops was converted into apartments while the high street in the middle was still left unchanged. Between 1967 and 2001, two types of beaches took up space where there once were a marina, a pier, and a fish market. The sea has been taken advantage to make a relaxing site for different purposes, private and public. Since then, the place was further expanded for hotels to develop a car park for visitors and the cafe was relocated to the right side of the hotel. Another major change to the area had been the construction of wind turbines in the southwest, next to the sea.
The maps illustrate the considerable
changes
that occurred in
Felixstone
in the UK over the course of 34 years, from 1967 to 2001.

Overall
, it is
clear
that the area was completely transformed with the addition of wind turbines and apartments;
however
, the golf course, dunes, and
some
trees remain unchanged.

The most visible and striking difference is that the farmland has
been industrialized
to
make
room for other entertainment facilities such as a swimming pool, a hotel, and tennis courts. One of the shops
was converted
into apartments while the high street in the middle was
still
left
unchanged.

Between 1967 and 2001, two types of beaches took up space where there once were a marina, a pier, and a fish market. The sea has
been taken
advantage to
make
a relaxing site for
different
purposes, private and public. Since then, the place was
further
expanded for hotels to develop a car park for visitors and the
cafe
was relocated
to the right side of the hotel. Another major
change
to the area had been the construction of wind turbines in the southwest,
next
to the sea.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show changes in Felixstone in the UK between 1967 and 2001.

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