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The diagram shows the way in which wind-powered energy is created and transported to the customer. Write the report for a university lecturer describing the process

The diagram shows the way in which wind-powered energy is created and transported to the customer. Write the report for a university lecturer describing the process yLLKM
The picture illustrates the process which describes how wind-powered electricity is produced and delivered to the consumers. Overall, there are five main steps in the creation of wind energy, starting by choosing suitable locations for the construction which includes rotor and blades, to the transportation of the electricity to the users. The first stage of the progress is placing the tower in an appropriate site for the purpose of utilizing wind power. This power makes the rotor and blades rotate 360 degrees. The role of these tools is to continually spin until the electrical output is created. This wind-powered electricity is reserved in large storage batteries if there is no wind. In the last two steps, people use transformer to dramatically rise the voltages of raw electrical output (from 700 volts to about 38, 000 volts) in order to decrease the waste of energy when electric is transmitted in the high tension lines to the people for consumption afterwards.
The picture illustrates the process which
describes
how wind-powered electricity
is produced
and delivered to the consumers.

Overall
, there are five main steps in the creation of wind energy, starting by choosing suitable locations for the construction which includes rotor and blades, to the transportation of the electricity to the users.

The
first
stage of the progress is placing the tower in an appropriate site for the purpose of utilizing wind power. This power
makes
the rotor and blades rotate 360 degrees. The role of these tools is to
continually
spin until the electrical output
is created
. This wind-powered electricity
is reserved
in large storage batteries if there is no wind.

In the last two steps,
people
use
transformer to
dramatically
rise the voltages of raw electrical output (from 700 volts to about 38, 000 volts) in order to decrease the waste of energy when electric
is transmitted
in the high tension lines to the
people
for consumption afterwards.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which wind-powered energy is created and transported to the customer. Write the report for a university lecturer describing the process

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4 paragraphs
159 words
7.0
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