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Ielts academic task-1 practice

Ielts academic task-1 practice Wggp0
The table illustrates the percentage of national consumer expenditure by category in five different countries in the year 2000. Overall, European countries which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey had the highest percantage of spending on food, drinks, tobacco among these three category. While the percentage of leisure, education was the lowest category. In category of food, drinks, tobacco, Turkey was the highest rate which was 32, 14%. In contrast the lowest expenditure was made by Sweden, which rate was 15, 77 which was lower than twofold Turkey's rate. Ireland's rate was 28, 91%, the percentage was the closest rate to Turkey. Spain and Italy's rate were at 18, 80% and 16, 36% respectively. Clothing, footwear which comprised almost one-tenth of Italy's rate. Turkey, Spain and Ireland's percentages between 6 and 7. Sweden's rate at 5, 40%. All countries' the lowest percentage of expenditure on leisure, education. Turkey's expenditure rate was 4, 35% which was the highest rate in that category. Sweden and Italy's rate were nearly same 3, 22% and 3, 20% respectively. Ireland's spending rate at 2, 21% on leisure, education and the lowest rate at 1, 98% with Spain.
The table illustrates the
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percentage
of national consumer
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expenditure
by
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category
in five
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different
countries in the year 2000.

Overall
, European countries which are Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey had the highest
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percantage
of spending on food, drinks, tobacco among these three
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category
. While the
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percentage
of leisure, education was the
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lowest
category.

In
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category
of food, drinks, tobacco, Turkey was the highest
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rate
which was 32, 14%. In
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contrast
the
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lowest
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expenditure
was made
by Sweden, which
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rate
was 15, 77 which was lower than twofold Turkey's
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rate
. Ireland's
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rate
was 28, 91%, the
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percentage
was the closest
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rate
to Turkey. Spain and Italy's
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rate
were at 18, 80% and 16, 36%
respectively
.

Clothing, footwear which comprised almost one-tenth of Italy's
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rate
. Turkey, Spain and Ireland's
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percentages
between 6 and 7. Sweden's
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rate
at 5, 40%.

All countries' the
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lowest
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percentage
of
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expenditure
on leisure, education. Turkey's
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expenditure
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rate
was 4, 35% which was the highest
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rate
in that
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category
. Sweden and Italy's
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rate
were
nearly
same 3, 22% and 3, 20%
respectively
. Ireland's spending
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rate
at 2, 21% on leisure, education and the
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lowest
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rate
at 1, 98% with Spain.
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IELTS academic Ielts academic task-1 practice

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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