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The two diagram presentation an island pre-after and than development holiday-maker resources

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The maps compare a small island before and after the developments for tourism purposesThe island was originally undeveloped exclusively plenty of trees occupied the northern and southern parts in the central port of the island two separate accomodation area were built. A reception area and restaurant were located in the centre of these two areas on the Western edge of the island located tourists to swim
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of trees occupied the northern and southern parts in the central port of the
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two separate
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of these two areas on the Western edge of the
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located tourists to
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IELTS academic The two diagram presentation an island pre-after and than development holiday-maker resources

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1 paragraphs
65 words
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