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The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer. pQa0
The given chart illustrates the process of how natural gas is manufactured and conveyed to the consumer, which includes car gas and gas appliances. In general, there are two steps to the transportation of natural gas and more extra stages until the gas is used by the customers. To begin, natural gas from the gas well is put and processed in a gas processing station. After that, the processed gas is transported to two locations which are the gas station and the gas supply station. Following this, these two different stations have different purposes. The gas station supplies gas for transportations. On the other hand, the gas supply station produces either non-piped gas tanks or pipeline networks to be the gas appliances for some gas equipment, such as a microwave or a stove.
The
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given
chart illustrates the process of how natural
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gas
is manufactured
and conveyed to the consumer, which includes car
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gas
and
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gas
appliances.
In general
, there are two steps to the transportation of natural
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gas
and more extra stages until the
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gas
is
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used
by the customers.

To
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begin
, natural
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gas
from the
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gas
well
is put
and processed in a
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gas
processing
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station
. After that, the processed
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gas
is transported
to two locations which are the
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gas
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station
and the
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gas
supply station.

Following this, these two
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different
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stations
have
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different
purposes. The
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gas
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station
supplies
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gas
for transportations.
On the other hand
, the
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gas
supply
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station
produces either non-piped
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gas
tanks or pipeline networks to be the
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gas
appliances for
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some
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gas
equipment, such as a microwave or a stove.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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  American English
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133 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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