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The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer. P9Ld
The diagram demonstrates the process of manufacturing and conveying natural gas to the consumers. As can be seen, the diagram consists of 6 stages. Customary, natural gas is obtained ending with applying it into gas appliances and cars to satisfy consumers’ demand. First of all, natural gas is procured from the gas well as raw material then it will be transferred to a gas processing station for purifying raw natural gas by taking away impurities. After that, it will be assembled into the tank of the truck so it can be convenient for them to transfer it to another processing stage and separate them into two different ways are gas stations to service car drivers to help their cars work and the next destination is gas supply stations. Secondly, the
The diagram demonstrates the process of manufacturing and conveying
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natural
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gas
to the consumers.

As can be
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seen
, the diagram consists of 6 stages. Customary,
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natural
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gas
is obtained
ending with applying it into
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gas
appliances and cars to satisfy consumers’ demand.

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First of all
,
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natural
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gas
is procured
from the
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gas
well as raw material then it will
be transferred
to a
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gas
processing station for purifying raw
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natural
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gas
by taking away impurities. After that, it will
be assembled
into the tank of the truck
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so
it can be convenient for them to transfer it to another processing stage and separate them into two
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different
ways are
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gas
stations to service car drivers to
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help
their cars work and the
next
destination is
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gas
supply stations.
Secondly
, the
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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