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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. blx6
As we can see in the graph that illustrates radio and television that people watching and listening throughtout their daily routine in the year of 1992. At first, as shown in the graph, the television graph is slightly increased from timing 6 o'clock morning to 2 o'clock noon, approximately 20% of UK population over 4 years watching television at this timings. Further, there is drastic increment in the number of people watching television from 2 o'clock noon to 8 o'clock evening and it is the peak time to watch television by nearly 50% of population of UK. In contrast, there is drastic decrease in the amount of people watching television from 8 o'clock to midnight 2 o'clock and then graph leveled-off and stabilized from 2 o'clock midnight to 6 o'clock morning. Conversely, the graph of radio rise from nearly 10% of population listening to radio at 6 o'clock morning and touch at the highest point closely to 30% of population. From the top percentage point, the graph of radio plungted down at 2 o'clock, from that point the flacutations are seen in the graph. Almost from 6 o'clock evening, people are less interest in radio and graph is straightly leveled-down from 6 o'clock to midnight 2 o'clock. It touches to the 0% of population at the bottome at nearly 3 o'clock midnight. By estimated data, we can conclude that people in UK have more number of population which are interested in watching television rather than listening to radio and during morning hours people are likely to listen to radio and nevertheless, television seems to be watch by people mostly in evening hours in UK by the whole day routine in the year 1992.
As we can
see
in the
graph
that illustrates
radio
and
television
that
people
watching and listening
throughtout
their daily routine in the year of 1992.

At
first
, as shown in the
graph
, the
television
graph
is
slightly
increased from timing 6
o'clock
morning to 2
o'clock
noon, approximately 20% of UK
population
over 4 years watching
television
at
this
timings.
Further
, there is drastic increment in the number of
people
watching
television
from 2
o'clock
noon to 8
o'clock
evening and it is the peak time to
watch
television
by
nearly
50% of
population
of UK.
In contrast
, there is drastic decrease in the amount of
people
watching
television
from 8
o'clock
to midnight 2
o'clock
and then
graph
leveled-off and stabilized from 2
o'clock
midnight to 6
o'clock
morning.

Conversely
, the
graph
of
radio
rise from
nearly
10% of
population
listening to
radio
at 6
o'clock
morning and touch at the highest point
closely
to 30% of
population
. From the top percentage point, the
graph
of
radio
plungted
down at 2
o'clock
, from that point the
flacutations
are
seen
in the
graph
. Almost from 6
o'clock
evening,
people
are less interest in
radio
and
graph
is
straightly
leveled-down from 6
o'clock
to midnight 2
o'clock
. It touches to the 0% of
population
at the
bottome at
nearly
3
o'clock
midnight.

By estimated data, we can conclude that
people
in UK have more number of
population
which
are interested
in watching
television
rather
than listening to
radio
and during morning hours
people
are likely to listen to
radio
and
nevertheless
,
television
seems to be
watch
by
people
mostly
in evening hours in UK by the whole day routine in the year 1992.
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