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The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer. BR76
The diagram demonstrates how natural gas produced and transported to the customers. In general, there 6 steps and 2 ways to use for the consumers. From the rich land of oil, they have many gas wells, on every gas well there will be one drill, that drill takes the job of collecting natural gas. After that, natural gas will be transported to the gas processing station or a factory. In this step, gas is more valuable and more efficient for using. Then they transport tons of gas to the gas station or gas supply station. At the gas station, gas is used as a kind of energy to power cars, but at the gas supply station, gas is contained in many tanks or going into pipeline network which is connected to every house. Gas not only powers car, vehicles, but it also can use for some appliances in our home.
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produced and transported to the customers.
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for the consumers. From the rich land of oil, they have
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wells, on every
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well there will be one drill, that drill takes the job of collecting natural
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gas
. After that, natural
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will
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to the
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processing
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station
or a factory. In this step,
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is more valuable and more efficient for using. Then they transport tons of
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gas
to the
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gas
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station
or
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supply
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. At the
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as a kind of energy to power cars,
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supply
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,
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tanks or going into pipeline network which
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to every
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.
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not
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powers car, vehicles,
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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