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The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the manufacturing of coffee, beginning with picking the beans and ending with sales in stores. In order to provide coffee, the beans must undergo a variety of processes including drying, grinding, heating and cooling. To begin with coffee beans are harvested by hand and then left out in sun to dry. Once the beans are dry, they are roasted nicely a special oven and then cooled rapidly. Next, the beans are ground into a powder which is then combined with hot water. Following this, the mixture is strained and then the filtered material is frozen. In the subsequent stage, the frozen mixture is ground once more and then the granules are dried in vacuum. Finally, the dried coffee powder is packaged and can now be transported to stores for sales.
The diagram illustrates the steps involved in the manufacturing of
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coffee
, beginning with picking the
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beans
and ending with sales in stores.

In order to provide
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coffee
, the
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beans
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must
undergo a variety of processes including drying, grinding, heating and cooling. To
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begin
with
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coffee
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beans
are harvested
by hand and then
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left
out in sun to dry. Once the
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beans
are dry, they
are roasted
nicely
a special oven and then cooled
rapidly
.
Next
, the
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beans
are ground
into a powder which is then combined with hot water. Following this, the mixture
is strained
and then the filtered material
is frozen
. In the subsequent stage, the frozen mixture
is ground
once more and then the granules
are dried
in vacuum.
Finally
, the dried
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coffee
powder
is packaged
and can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
be transported
to stores for sales.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

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