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The diagram shows the structure and how it's work of home smokery

The diagram shows the structure and how it's work of home smokery 86gkm

The assigned diagram illustrates information regarding the structure of a home smoker as well as how it works Overall, at a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that in the process that are three main stepsInitially, there are two lids in the underground area and one box in the upper and down side of the level. Fresh air flow go inside the empty lid then the air flow go to second lid where the logs are burned in this process fresh air flow go to the ground level box through pipes which is installed in it then the air burn the meat

The assigned diagram illustrates information regarding the structure of a home smoker as well
 as how it works Overall
, at a fleeting glance, it is immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that in the process that are three main Possible spelling mistake found.
stepsInitially
, there are two lids in the underground area and one box in the upper and Did you mean "downside"?downside
down side
 of the level. Fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 flow go inside the empty lid then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 flow go to second lid where the logs are burned
 in this process fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 flow go to the ground level box through pipes which is installed
 in it then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 burn the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphmeat.meat!meat?meat:meat,meat;
meat

IELTS academic The diagram shows the structure and how it's work of home smokery

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

101 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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