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The diagram shows the structure and how it's work of home smokery

The diagram shows the structure and how it's work of home smokery 86gkm
The assigned diagram illustrates information regarding the structure of a home smoker as well as how it works Overall, at a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that in the process that are three main stepsInitially, there are two lids in the underground area and one box in the upper and down side of the level. Fresh air flow go inside the empty lid then the air flow go to second lid where the logs are burned in this process fresh air flow go to the ground level box through pipes which is installed in it then the air burn the meat
The assigned diagram illustrates information regarding the structure of a home smoker
as well
as how it works
Overall
, at a fleeting glance, it is
immensely
clear
that in the process that are three main
stepsInitially
, there are two lids in the underground area and one box in the upper and
down side
of the level. Fresh
air
flow go inside the empty lid then the
air
flow go to second lid where the logs
are burned
in this process fresh
air
flow go to the ground level box through pipes which
is installed
in it then the
air
burn the
meat
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the structure and how it's work of home smokery

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
101 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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