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The bar chart illustrate the information about kilometers of route and how much passengers travel in per year between 1863 and 2001 in Europe city.

The bar chart illustrate the information about kilometers of route and how much passengers travel in per year between 1863 and 2001 in Europe city. d3kB7
Overall, it can be vividly manifested that the highest kilometres of the route by Paris individuals in 1863. Whereas, in Stockholm, Gibson and rome approximately equal routes were completed by masses with the difference of five points whilst the largest decline was noticed in Madrid and Berlin which was nearby 11 to 28 respectively from 1961 to 2001. Moving to the rest of the data, Rome Madrid, and Berlin approximately the same data was observed which was nearly 50%. In addition, a dramatic rose was seen in the libsan nation which was nearby in 1927. Then, dramatically decline was noticed in Paris and Stockholm 775 to 1191 respectively.
Overall
, it can be
vividly
manifested that the highest
Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.
kilometres
of the route by Paris individuals in 1863. Whereas, in Stockholm, Gibson and
Possible spelling mistake found.
rome
approximately equal routes
were completed
by masses with the difference of five points whilst the largest decline
was noticed
in Madrid and Berlin which was nearby 11 to 28
respectively
from 1961 to 2001. Moving to the rest of the data, Rome Madrid, and Berlin approximately the same data
was observed
which was
nearly
50%.
In addition
, a dramatic rose was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in the
Possible spelling mistake found.
libsan
nation which was nearby in 1927. Then,
dramatically
decline
was noticed
in Paris and Stockholm 775 to 1191
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrate the information about kilometers of route and how much passengers travel in per year between 1863 and 2001 in Europe city.

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