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The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages. LjaG
The digram provides information about different languages relationships. Overall, British English is more used than American English with several categories while American English has fewer categories. Looking at the first data from American English. It is consists of 2 categories which are United States of America and Canada where United States of America devided into six countries while Canada consists one third of USA. Canada devided by two categories which are Angelophone Canada and Francophone Canada as the country states using American English from Canada. The USA American English consists of American Samoa, West Coast, North East Cost, and Puerto Rico. In addition, The Philipines ad Mid West also using American English Branch from the USA. Regarding the data from British English Branch, Indian and Pakistan have other several forms of Indian English followed by Africa, devived into 3 categories which are West Africa, East Africa, and Angelo Phones Africa. Furthermore, the orginial British Isles devided into 4 which are Iris, English, Welsh, and Scotish. Lastly, West Indies together with Austalia and Far East have the same number of categories in each state which is two from their own continent.
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, British English is more
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used
than American English with several
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categories
while American English has fewer categories.

Looking at the
first
data from American English. It is consists of 2
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categories
which
are United
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States
of America and Canada where United
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States
of America
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devided
into six countries while Canada consists one third
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of USA
. Canada
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devided
by two
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categories
which are
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Angelophone
Canada and Francophone Canada as the country
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states
using American English from Canada. The USA American English consists of American Samoa, West Coast, North East Cost, and Puerto Rico.
In addition
, The
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Philipines
ad Mid West
also
using American English Branch from the USA.

Regarding the data from British English Branch, Indian and Pakistan have other several forms of Indian English followed by Africa,
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devived
into 3
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categories
which are West Africa, East Africa, and Angelo Phones Africa.
Furthermore
, the
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orginial
British Isles
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devided
into 4 which are Iris, English, Welsh, and
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Scotish
.
Lastly
, West Indies together with
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Austalia
and Far East have the same number of
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in each
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state
which is two from their
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own
continent.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the relationship between a numbers of different languages.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
190 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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