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the chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban area in three countries and predictions for future years.

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The line graph illustrates the information about millions of people moving from the countryside to the city center in three different countries, such as Iran, Indonesia and Russia in the past and following years of prediction. Overall, people moving from rural to urban places in Iran and Russia had increased considerably, and Indonesia had risen slowly. However, the number of individuals in Iran has a majority change from the third to the first over 25 years. In 2000, Russia had the highest among of people, with 15 million, while Indonesia and Iran almost had the same numbers of individuals who had moved to urban areas roughly 10 million and 9 million, respectively. Over the fifteen years from 2005, Iran, to compare with the other two countries, which had the lowest number of people moving had increased exponentially from 10 million masses in 2005 to the same number of people as Russia in 2020, with 80 million. In the future 2025, the number of people in those countries has been predicted, Indonesia 30 million, Iran 95 million and followed by Russia 85 million.
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countries, such as Iran, Indonesia and Russia in the past and following years of prediction.

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moving from rural to urban places in Iran and Russia had increased
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, and Indonesia had risen
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of individuals in Iran has a
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In 2000, Russia had the highest among of
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, with 15
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, while Indonesia and Iran almost had the same
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. Over the fifteen years from 2005, Iran, to compare with the other two countries, which had the lowest
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moving had increased
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masses in 2005 to the same
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, Indonesia 30
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, Iran 95
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and followed by Russia 85
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the movement of people from rural to urban area in three countries and predictions for future years.

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