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The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.

The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. A1xl
The presented illustration of the line graph provides information about Burnaby public library and the rate of books read by female and male groups between 2011 and 2014. Overall, it can be clearly that, the largest rate of books read by male groups than females. It is conspicuous that, the figure of books which were read by gentlemen rocketed slightly from 2011 to 2012. However, the rate of male group, had grown dramatically, and rose to 14. 000 in 2014. By contrast, the number of female readers fluctuated. For example, the largest rate of books read was in 2013, and reached 10. 000. However, in 2014 fell considerably, and the result was 8. 000.
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by female and male groups between 2011 and 2014.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
that, the largest
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rate
of
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books
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read
by male groups than females.

It is conspicuous that, the figure of
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books
which were
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read
by gentlemen rocketed
slightly
from 2011 to 2012.
However
, the
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rate
of male group, had grown
dramatically
, and rose to 14. 000 in 2014.

By contrast, the number of female readers fluctuated.
For example
, the largest
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rate
of
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books
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read
was in 2013, and reached 10. 000.
However
, in 2014 fell
considerably
, and the result was 8. 000.
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