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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian citites.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian citites. D5O7
The given chart illustrates information with reference to survey’s analysis which was conducted to identify how much coffee and tea were purchased and drank by city residents in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. Overall, most people preferred going to cafe for drinks and it has the highest percentage completed except in Adelaide while buying fresh coffee by people recorded the lowest proportion. Generally, the number of people, who bought fresh coffee, completed the least. It can be apparently seen that in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart over 60 percent of residents went to a cafe for coffee or tea in the last 4 weeks, while in Brisbane and Adelaide this ratio shows approximately a half. Adelaide is the only city where most people bought instant coffee in the final 4 weeks, with 50%. Moreover, Sydney and Melbourne saw the highest percentage of people who got fresh coffee than other cities, well over 40%. Similarly, the number of people who bought ready coffee in Brisbane, Adelaide show fewer than 35%, while Hobart demonstrated a slightly higher ratio, approximately 40 percent.
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and drank by city residents in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.

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preferred going to
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for drinks and it has the highest percentage completed except in Adelaide while buying fresh
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by
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recorded the lowest proportion.
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, completed the least.

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that in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart over 60 percent of residents went to a
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for
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or tea in the last 4 weeks, while in Brisbane and Adelaide this ratio
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approximately a half. Adelaide is the
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city where most
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bought
instant
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in the final 4 weeks, with 50%.

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, Sydney and Melbourne
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the highest percentage of
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than other cities, well over 40%.
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in Brisbane, Adelaide
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fewer than 35%, while Hobart demonstrated a
slightly
higher ratio, approximately 40 percent.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian citites.

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6.0
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