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The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now.

The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. pxPd

The maps show changes in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present. In general, the layout of the bookstore has been significantly changed, especially on the left-hand side of the room. A number of features have been moved and modified, while other facilities have been added. In 2000, there was a large section dedicated to fiction books on the left-hand side of the store. However, that section has been divided into four new sections, in which books on art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction are now displayed. The area for fiction books in the rear left corner of the store is now used for non-fiction books, while the old non-fiction section has been transformed into a new cafe. The central area of the room, which used to be for art, cookery, and hobby books, is now occupied by tables and chairs. Meanwhile, the space for travel books, new books, and the service desk, has remained unchanged over the years.

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show
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changes
 in the layout of a bookstore between 2000 and the present.

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, the layout of the bookstore has been significantly
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changed
, especially
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand side of the room. A number of features have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 and modified, while other facilities have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
.

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books
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left
-hand side of the store. However
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section
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 into four new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
sections
, in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 on art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 displayed.

The area for fiction You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
 in the rear This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 corner of the store is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
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used
 for non-fiction You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
, while the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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section
 has been transformed
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cafe
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used
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books
, is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 occupied by tables and chairs. Meanwhile, the space for travel You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
, new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
books
, and the service desk, has remained unchanged over the years. 