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The diagram shows the production of hydro-electricity

The diagram shows the production of hydro-electricity 151AW

The process diagram demonstrates the production of hydro-electricity. Overall, it is transparent from the endowed diagram that the procedure undergoes various steps. Absence of any single step may halt the entire process. It is vivid from the chart that water behind the dam goes through the reservoir to the intake. Intake consist of the trap which have big holes, from where the water passes. After going through the intake, there is a downward slope which helps the water to pass easily, called as penstock, which is actually a tunnel. Next, after passing through the penstock, water reaches to the turbine, which is connected to the generator. Shifting towards the rest of the information, when water reaches to the turbine, it helps the generator to produce the hydro-electricity. The generator is located below the powerhouse and is located above the turbine. The electricity is then produced and is given to the city or state by long distance power lines. Finally, the water which passes through the the turbine flows back to the river.

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