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THE THREE PIE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE COFFEE PRODUCTION AND CONSUMPTION ARROUND THE WORLD, AND ALSO THE PROFIT DISTRIBUTION.

THE THREE PIE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE COFFEE PRODUCTION AND CONSUMPTION ARROUND THE WORLD, AND ALSO THE PROFIT DISTRIBUTION. XyXeq
THE 3 PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATE THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF COFFEE PRODUCTION, CONSUMPTION AND PROFIT DISTRIBUTION IN 7 DIFFERENT COUNTRIES. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE PIE CHARTS THAT THE RATIO OF DELIVERY PROFIT WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF CONSUMPTION WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 12% COFFEE CONSUMPTION IN TURKEY AND THE HIGH AVERAGE OF CONSUMPTION WAS EUROPE CONSEQUENTLY, THE 41% COFFEE CONSUMPTION IN EUROPE SIMILARLY ONLY 9% COFFEE CONSUMPTION IN JAPAN WHILE THE 2ND HIGHEST COFFEE CONSUMPTION IN AMERICA BY 39%. ALTHOUGH VIETNAM HAD ONLY 14% COFFEE PRODUCTION AND JAPAN 18% COFFEE PRODUCTION LIKEWISE THE GROWEST VALUE OF COFFEE PRODUCTION IN SOUTH AFRICA TO 44% AND 2ND EXPANSION VALUE OF COFFEE PRODUCTION IN INDONESIA WAS 22%. NONETHELESS, THE HIGHEST PROFIT DISTRIBUTION WAS DELIVERY. THE NUMERAL OF DELIVERY PROFIT DISTRIBUTION WAS 53% AND 10% EXPORTERS PROFIT DISTRIBUTION HENCE 15% PRODUCERS PROFIT DISTRIBUTION THENCE THE 2ND PERCENTAGE OF PROFIT DISTRIBUTION WAS RETAILERS THAT'S WHY THE 24% RETAILERS PROFIT DISTRIBUTION.
THE 3 PIE CHARTS ILLUSTRATE THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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IELTS academic THE THREE PIE CHARTS BELOW SHOW THE COFFEE PRODUCTION AND CONSUMPTION ARROUND THE WORLD, AND ALSO THE PROFIT DISTRIBUTION.

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