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THE TABLE BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE SITUATION OF MARRIAGE AND AGE FROM 1960 TO 2000 IN AUSTRALIA.

THE TABLE BELOW GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE SITUATION OF MARRIAGE AND AGE FROM 1960 TO 2000 IN AUSTRALIA. KVMr6
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF SITUATION MARRIAGE AND AGE OVER A PERIOD OF 40 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE TABLE THAT THE RATIO OF CIVIL MARRIAGE WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF RELIGION MARRIAGE WAS THE LOWEST WHILE THE AVERAGE OF BRIDEGROM AGE WAS THE HIGH, WHEREAS THE AVERAGE OF BRIDE AGE WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 25000 RELIGION MARRIAGE AND 8000 CIVIL MARRIAGE IN 1960 IN THE MARRIAGE THE BRIDE AGE WAS 21 AND BRIDEGROM AGE WAS 24 NEXT YEAR THAT VALUE WAS INCREASING TO 28000 AND CIVIL MARRIAGE VALUE ELEVATION BY 12000 IN 1970 IN THAT MARRIAGE THE BRIDE AGE WAS 23 AND BRIDEGROM AGE WAS 25. AFTER 10 YEARS IN 1990, THE NUMERAL OF RELIGION MARRIAGE IMMENSELY GROW TO 32000 LIKEWISE EXPANSIO TO 16000 CIVIL MARRIAGE IN THE MARRIAGE THE BRIDE AGE WAS 27 THENCE BRIDEGROM AGE WAS 30. LAST YEAR IN 2000, THE QUANTITY OF RELIGION MARRIAGE RISE BY 34000 HENCE THE DIGIT OF CIVIL MARRIAGE EXTREMELY SOAR BY 40000 IN THAT MARRIAGE THE BRIDE AGE WAS 30 AND BRIDEGROM AGE WAS 32.
THE TABLE ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF SITUATION
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OVER A PERIOD OF 40 YEARS.
OVERALL
, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE TABLE THAT THE RATIO OF
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WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF
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WAS THE LOWEST WHILE THE AVERAGE OF
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BRIDEGROM
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WAS THE HIGH, WHEREAS THE AVERAGE OF
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WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE
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PERIOD. INITIATING AT 25000
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AND 8000
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IN 1960 IN THE
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WAS 21 AND
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WAS 24
NEXT
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THAT VALUE WAS INCREASING TO 28000 AND
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VALUE ELEVATION BY 12000 IN 1970 IN THAT
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THE
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WAS 23 AND
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WAS 25. AFTER 10 YEARS IN 1990, THE NUMERAL OF
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IMMENSELY
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EXPANSIO
TO 16000
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IN THE
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WAS 27 THENCE
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WAS 30. LAST
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IN 2000, THE QUANTITY OF
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RISE BY 34000
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THE DIGIT OF
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EXTREMELY
SOAR BY 40000 IN THAT
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THE
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WAS 30 AND
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WAS 32.
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