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the pie charts illustrate the proportion of online retail shopping in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013. in general, at the beginning of the period travel was the most significant sale of online retailing, while books contributed the least to the retailing sales of New Zealand. in comparison, at the end of the period, film and music was the highest sector, while clothes was the lowest segment. the travel product is the most popular sales online in 2003.

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 pie charts illustrate the proportion of online retail shopping in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
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 general, at the beginning of the period travel was the most significant sale of online retailing, while books contributed the least to the retailing sales of New Zealand. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
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 travel product is the most popular sales online in 2003. 

IELTS academic onlibe shopping of retail in New Zealand

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

78 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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