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The diagram shows the process for labeling Shellfish

The diagram shows the process for labeling Shellfish 30OMJ

The provided diagram illustrates man made process for labeling shellfish for international market step by step. Overall, it can be seen that this linear process contains seven stages, by which shell fishes from seas are being processed and delivered to the intercontinental trade by type of fishing that names artisanal fishing. Firstly, the satellite takes a signal via new innovation, that is called GPS which defines location of shellfish, and send it to be monitored. People put GPS devices into different places to discover mollusks, it automatically observed clams. Monitor based in Santiago, where employees observe and follow the process to do it accuracy. After that, created barcodes are labeled to caught fishes to certify each of them and put in boxes. Once this has happened, they are send to processing fabric, where shellfish process happens. Finally, already ready certified product is received to variety of regionals and foreign customers.

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