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The ground floor floor plan of a university department in year 2000 and 2015.

The ground floor floor plan of a university department in year 2000 and 2015. PLKRJ

The maps depicts information about the changes occured to the ground floor plan of a university department in year 2000 and 2015. A glance at the maps reveals that, in 2015, several new facilities were added in a university department such as car park and IT center. In 2000, the department consisted of a building containing three seminar rooms, a library, and an office. By 2015, the new building was extended to North and two new seminar rooms were added while, library and office combined and made a large space office.

The maps You should probably use "depict".depict
depicts
 information about the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "occurred", the past tense form of the verb 'occur'?occurred
occured
 to the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 plan of a university department in year 2000 and 2015.

A glance at the maps reveals that, in 2015, several new facilities were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in a university department such as car park and IT center.

In 2000, the department consisted of a building containing three seminar rooms, a library, and an office. By 2015, the new building was extended
 to North and two new seminar rooms were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 while, library and office combined and made a large space office. 