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The chart shows the number of different kinds of fishes during 1982 and 2007.

The chart shows the number of different kinds of fishes during 1982 and 2007. eEkEV

The line graph illustrates the data about the distinct types of marines namely Atlantic code, Haddock, Yellowfin Tuna and Swordfish from 1982 to 2007. The units are measured in numbers. Overall the highest number of fish was the Atlantic code and hit the peak point in 1982, while it seems that the number of Haddock and Swordfish was intact throughout the given period. According to the provided presentation, in 1982, there were almost 2, 30, 000 Atlantic code fishes which was the most as compare to other, but it showed decline trend in the remaining years and reached to slightly below 1, 50, 000 in 2007. Despite this, Swordfish was the one which remained same during the given time period. As can be observed in the statistics that before surging to 2, 00, 000 in 1982, the number of Yellowfin Tuna was declined by 50, 000 in 1992. After that it dropped down dramatically between 2002 and 2007. Apart from that in the year of 1982, the number of Haddock was approximately 70, 000, whereas it remained stable till end.

The line graph illustrates the data about the distinct types of marines namely
 Atlantic code, Haddock, Possible spelling mistake found.Yellow fin
Yellowfin
 Tuna and Swordfish from 1982 to 2007. The units are measured
 in numbers.

Overall
 the highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of fish was the Atlantic code and hit the peak point in 1982, while it seems that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Haddock and Swordfish was intact throughout the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period.

According to the provided presentation, in 1982, there were almost 2, 30, 000 Atlantic code fishes which was the most as compare to other, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 decline trend in the remaining years and reached to slightly
 below 1, 50, 000 in 2007. Despite this, Swordfish was the one which remained same during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 time period.

As can be observed
 in the statistics that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 surging to 2, 00, 000 in 1982, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Possible spelling mistake found.Yellow fin
Yellowfin
 Tuna was declined
 by 50, 000 in 1992. After that it This phrase is redundant. Consider using "dropped".dropped
dropped down
dramatically
 between 2002 and 2007. Apart from that in the year of 1982, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of Haddock was approximately 70, 000, whereas it remained stable till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
. 