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The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste.

The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste. pa2D0
The pie charts give information about how United Kingdom, South Korea and Sweden deal with their hazardous wastes. Overall, it can be seen that South Korea mostly recycles its waste. On the other hand, both Sweden and UK prefer to bury it to the underground. In Republic of Korea, there are only three ways of waste processing. Nearly 70 percents of it are been recycled, slightly higher than one-fifth are buried, and the rest are combusted. On the other hand, although the ways of waste processing in South Korea and Sweden are similar, the proportion are different. Only one-fourth is recycled in Sweden. Instead, more than half of the wastes are buried. Although, in United Kingdom there are four ways of waste processing, they do not do recycling. More than four-fifth are buried underground, two percents are incinerated, and the rest are either thrown into the sea or chemically treated.
The pie charts give information about how United Kingdom, South Korea and Sweden deal with their hazardous wastes.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that South Korea
mostly
recycles its
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waste
.
On the other hand
, both Sweden and UK prefer to bury it to the underground.

In Republic of Korea, there are
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only
three ways of
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waste
processing.
Nearly
70 percents of it
are been
recycled,
slightly
higher than one-fifth
are buried
, and the rest
are combusted
.

On the other hand
, although the ways of
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waste
processing in South Korea and Sweden are similar, the proportion are
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different
.
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Only
one-fourth
is recycled
in Sweden.
Instead
, more than half of the
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wastes
are buried
.

Although,
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in United Kingdom
there are four ways of
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waste
processing, they do not
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do recycling
. More than four-fifth
are buried
underground, two percents
are incinerated
, and the rest are either thrown into the sea or
chemically
treated.
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