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The pie charts show information about the time spent on smartphones or tablets by individuals in 2005 -2010.

The pie charts show information about the time spent on smartphones or tablets by individuals in 2005 -2010. 0wNMQ
The rendered pie charts illustrates information about the time utilised on cellphones and tablets by folks in six distinct activities in two years (2005 and 2010). The data is calibrated in terms of percentage. Most noticeably of all, with the passage of time, Individuals used to devote their excess time on the given tasks except social networking and utilities. On having an in- depth view on chart, it is lucid that as regards 2005, maximum percentage of time utilised by people on games (35), followed by social networking, values accounted as 29. However, time spent on digital gadgets by individuals in order to get news reported as 3%, whereas 20 per cent of time citizens spent on utilities. Interestingly, time allocated to music and videos was almost two- fold that of others, figures emerged as 8% and 5%, respectively. On further description, it is vivid that regarding 2010, masses preferred to spent their much more time on games, value reported as over the half of the total (57%). In contrast, almost similar proportion of time was spent by society on utilities and news, values accounted as 3 and 4, orderly. Astonishingly, natives liked to spend 8 % of their time on doing alternative activities on mobile phones and tablets, whilst people engaged themselves in 13 per cent of their time to music and videos. Subsequently, proportion of time was allocated by human beings on social networking noticed as 15.
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on cellphones and tablets by folks in six distinct activities in two years (2005 and 2010). The data
is calibrated
in terms of percentage.

Most
noticeably
of all, with the passage of
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time
, Individuals
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used
to devote their excess
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time
on the
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given
tasks except social networking and utilities.

On having an in- depth view on chart, it is lucid that as regards 2005, maximum percentage of
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time
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utilised
by
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people
on games (35), followed by social networking, values accounted as 29.
However
,
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time
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spent
on digital gadgets by individuals in order to
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get
news reported as 3%, whereas 20 per cent of
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time
citizens
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spent
on utilities.
Interestingly
,
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time
allocated to music and videos was almost two- fold that of others, figures emerged as 8% and 5%,
respectively
.

On
further
description, it is vivid that regarding 2010, masses preferred to
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spent
their much more
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time
on games, value reported as over the half of the total (57%).
In contrast
, almost similar proportion of
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time
was
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spent
by society on utilities and news, values accounted as 3 and 4, orderly.
Astonishingly
, natives liked to spend 8 % of their
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time
on doing alternative activities on mobile phones and tablets, whilst
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
engaged themselves in 13 per cent of their
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time
to music and videos.
Subsequently
, proportion of
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time
was allocated
by human beings on social networking noticed as 15.
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IELTS academic The pie charts show information about the time spent on smartphones or tablets by individuals in 2005 -2010.

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