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The diagram gives information about how to produce electricity form geothermal energy. The process includes five main stages which is starting from cold water and ending with to get electricity from the energy tower. First of all, the cold water is pumped down into the injection wall with the length of 4. 5 km and it flows through the geothermal zone which is also called hot rocks. After passing through that zone, the cold water converts into the hot water which is pumped up with the production wall. The hot water is put into a condenser which is a kind of machine that can be changed from the hot water into stream. When the stream is found, the gas is transported into turbine which can be powered by steam and it is passed into generator in order to get electricity. After that, the electricity is transferred into energy tower. b
The diagram gives information about how to produce
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electricity
form geothermal energy.

The process includes five main stages which is starting from
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cold
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water
and ending with to
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get
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electricity
from the energy tower.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
is pumped
down into the injection wall with the length of 4. 5 km and it flows through the geothermal zone which is
also
called hot rocks. After passing through that zone, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
converts into the hot
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water
which
is pumped
up with the production wall.

The hot
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water
is put
into a condenser which is a kind of machine that can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
from the hot
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
into stream. When the stream
is found
, the gas
is transported
into turbine which can
be powered
by steam and it
is passed
into generator in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electricity
. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
electricity
is transferred
into energy tower.
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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