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The provided vertical bar graph compares the proportion of population who aged 65 and more than in UK in 1985 as well as estimated for 2035. As an overview, it is anticipated that the percentage of people who aged 65 and above will increase in coming time. Looking into details, in 1985, the England had 15% civilians who aged sixty- five and it is estimated it will increase in coming time. As followed by Wales had more than fifteen percent folks complete same age pattern but it is assumed that it will be jump and reached at more than 25%. Furthermore, Scotland had slightly less population than Wales in population who were 65 it is anticipated that it will be doubled in 2035. Turning to the details of other countries, Northern Ireland had minimal ratio of individual who were aged 65 as compared to the other nations however there is a prediction that it will also rise in upcoming time. United kingdom and England had equal rate of population who completed certain age limit with 15% it is estimated it will climb up and settled at near to 23% in future.

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