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The map illustrates two possible locations for the planned supermarket (S1 and S2) in the Garden City

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The map illustrates two possible locations for the planned supermarket (S1 and S2) in the Garden City, which has a population of 65, 000 Overall, the first location is near Hindon area, where outside the town while S2 located in the town center. Looking at the map, the first possible site (S1) is far about 12km to Hindon where 10, 000 residents live and at the Northwest of Garlsdon. There are Main roads to the right of S1 that can access to the town center. Next to the left of S1 is railway that runs through from Hinton to Cransdon. Moreover, S1 close to residential area and not far form industrial zone. Meanwhile, the second possible place is S2, the place is located in the city of the town, where surrounded by housing. As we can see, this place near by Bransdon, which has a inhabitant of 15, 000. From S2 to Bransdon, people can travel on main roads, the distance between two sites is about 16km. Moreover, there are main roads and railway can connect S2 and Crasdon, which lies on south-east of Garlsons with the population of 29, 000.
The map illustrates two possible locations for the planned supermarket (S1 and S2) in the Garden City, which has a population of 65, 000

Overall
, the
first
location is near
Hindon
area, where outside the
town
while S2 located in the
town
center.

Looking at the map, the
first
possible site (S1) is far about
12km
to
Hindon
where 10, 000 residents
live
and at the Northwest of
Garlsdon
. There are Main roads to the right of S1 that can access to the
town
center.
Next
to the
left
of S1 is railway that runs through from Hinton to
Cransdon
.
Moreover
, S1 close to residential area and not far form industrial zone.

Meanwhile, the second possible place is S2, the place
is located
in the city of the
town
, where surrounded by housing. As we can
see
, this place
near by
Bransdon
, which has
a
inhabitant of 15, 000. From S2 to
Bransdon
,
people
can travel on main roads, the distance between two sites is about
16km
.
Moreover
, there are main roads and railway can connect S2 and
Crasdon
, which lies on south-east of
Garlsons
with the population of 29, 000.
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