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The diagram shows the information about the Australian bureau of meterelogy and forecast it.

The diagram shows the information about the Australian bureau of meterelogy and forecast it. 3M3Rl
The given diagram represent the Australian Bureau of Meteorology which gets up-to-date information about weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Overall, there are mainly four steps for forecasting, which includes incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and broadcast. As can be seen that, incoming information has three sources. To start with, satellite collect details about it use of the satellite photo. Radar get details through radar screen and drifting buoys through the synoptic charts. A satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart which can use for analysis and forecasting. Moreover, computer used for the preparing the broadcast and it is necessary before the broadcasting information to the public. The climate data broadcasting to the public in different three ways: Television, radio and telephone. Broadcast data to the people on TV by TV newspaper, Radio and telephone by the recorded announcement. To summarize, climate facts gathered by different types of sources and then analysis before the broadcast to the people.
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diagram represent the Australian Bureau of Meteorology which
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gets
up-to-date
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information
about weather in order to produce reliable forecast.
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, there are
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four steps for forecasting, which includes incoming
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information
, analysis and forecasting, preparing the
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broadcast
and
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broadcast
. As can be
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seen
that, incoming
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information
has three sources. To
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start
with, satellite collect
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details
about it
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of the satellite photo. Radar
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get
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details
through radar screen and drifting buoys through the synoptic charts. A satellite photo, radar screen and synoptic chart which can
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use
for analysis and forecasting.
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, computer
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used
for the preparing the
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broadcast
and it is necessary
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before
the broadcasting
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information
to the public. The climate data broadcasting to the public in
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different
three ways: Television, radio and telephone.
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data to the
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people
on TV by TV newspaper, Radio and telephone by the recorded announcement.
To summarize
, climate facts gathered by
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different
types of sources and then analysis
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before
the
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broadcast
to the
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.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the information about the Australian bureau of meterelogy and forecast it.

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