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The diagram outline the electricity produced in a hydroelectric power station. Overall, it is clearly seen that, hydroelectric power station has a four stages which begin with river into high level reservoir and end with power lines with national gride. To begin, there are broadly distributed into day stage and night stage. In a day stage river water collected in high level reservoir and this reservoir hold by dam. In additionally, intake open during day time and at night. similarly, flow of water to generate electricity at day through reversible turbines work as operate generator at day also, water flow low level reservoir then generator send to power lines to national gride Moreover, at night time reversible turbines pump water into high level reservoir then flow of water during pumping at night again water collected to high level reservoir and continued to this cycle
The diagram outline the electricity produced in a hydroelectric
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that, hydroelectric
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station has a four
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stages
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high
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level
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reservoir
and
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with
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power
lines with national
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gride
.

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distributed into day
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stage
and
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night
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stage
. In a day
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river
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water
collected in
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high
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level
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reservoir
and this
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reservoir
hold by dam. In
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night
.
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water
to generate electricity at day through reversible turbines work as operate generator at day
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flow low
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level
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then generator
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power
lines to national
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gride


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night time
reversible turbines pump
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water
into
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high
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level
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reservoir
then flow of
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water
during pumping at
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again
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water
collected to
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level
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and continued to this cycle
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the how electricity produce

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4 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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