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The graph shows information about types of accommodation of people on holiday in 1985, 1995 and 2005

The graph shows information about types of accommodation of people on holiday in 1985, 1995 and 2005 Q2PB3

The three pie charts compare the percentage of visitors who chose different types of accommodation from 1985 to 2005. It is clear that staying with relatives or friends was the most common choice in 1985 and 1995 but in 2005, the proportion of tourists living in hotels was highest. In 1985, over a half of travelers cohabitated with their relatives and friends, which declined to 35% after the next 10 years and continued to fall to 30% in 2005. In contrast, although only 16% of them rented a room in hotels in the initial year, this figure climbed to 28% in 1995 and peaked at 37% in 2005. Camping and caravan were always the less popular types of accommodation. In 1985, the percentage of people selecting the former choice doubled the figure for the latter one, at 19% and 10% respectively. Then, after falling to 12% in 1995, the percentage of campers recovered to its initial point at the end of the period. As the caravan, its proportion increased to a quarter in the following 10 years before falling back to 14% in 2005.

The three pie charts compare the percentage of visitors who chose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 types of

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAccommodation
accommodation
	from	1985	to	2005.

It	is	This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
	that	staying	with	relatives	or	friends	was	the	most	common	choice	in	1985	and

1995	This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
	in	2005, the	proportion	of	tourists	living	in	hotels	was	highest.

In	1985, over	a	half	of	travelers	Possible spelling mistake found.cohabited
cohabitated
	with	their	relatives	and	friends, which	declined

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
	35%	after the	next
	10	years	and	continued	to	fall	to	30%	in	2005. In	contrast, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphalthough.although!although?although:although,although;
although


This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
	16%	of	them	rented	a	room	in	hotels	in	the	initial	year, this	figure	climbed	to	28%	in

1995	and	peaked	at	37%	in	2005.

Camping	and	caravan	were	always	the	less	popular	types	of	accommodation. In	1985, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthe.the!the?the:the,the;
the


percentage	of	This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
	selecting	the	former	choice	doubled	the	figure	for	the	latter	one, at

19%	and	10%	respectively
. Then, after falling to	12%	in	1995, the	percentage	of	campers

recovered	to	its	initial	point	at	the	This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
	of	the	period. As	the	caravan, its	proportion	Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphincreased.increased!increased?increased:increased,increased;
increased


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
	a	quarter	in	the	following	10	years	This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
	falling	back	to	14%	in	2005. 