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The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to present day.

The diagram shows the development of a particular area between 1965 to present day. joOKX

The diagram illustrates how the changes have been occurred in particular area since 1965 to till the date. Overall, it can be seen that significant alterations have been made over the period. Meanwhile, increasing population led to made new houses and more facilities. In 1965, deoghar only few houses on the north west side and trees on the other side of the river. Trees had been removed to make the way for car parking. River which is flowing from the North to South, separate bridges have been constructed over the river for road and pedestrians. Furthermore, housing capacity has been increased over the time, more houses have been built on the right side of the river. Beside that, apartments are also available for growing population. Car parks are being available indifferent areas such as near the homes and river.

The diagram illustrates how the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 have been occurred
in particular
 area since 1965 to till the date.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that significant alterations have been made
 over the period. Meanwhile, increasing population led to made new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and more facilities.

In 1965, Possible spelling mistake found.deaferdeffer
deoghar
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only
 few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 on the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-westnorthwest
north west
 side and trees on the other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
. Trees had been removed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the way for car parking. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
River
 which is flowing from the North to South, separate bridges have been constructed
 over the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 for road and pedestrians.

Furthermore
, housing capacity has been increased
 over the time, more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 have been built
 on the right side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
. Beside that, apartments are also
 available for growing population. Car parks are being available indifferent areas such as near the homes and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
. 