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Leading Olympic Medal chart

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The given bar chart illustrate the number of Olympic medal victories by twelve distinct nations. Gold, silver and Bronze are depicted in different colours. As we can see USA is the leader of the pack, followed by Soviet union and United Kingdom. The Americans leading the table for a massive margin, showing thier dominance in the Olympic games. USA won over a 2, 000 medals altogether, including a massive chunk of Gold in the pocket. The Soviet union secured just under a 1000 Olympic medals and comes behind USA. United Kingdom seals thier third place in the chart by sweeping over a 500 medals in total. Unlike in top, the medal difference is a narrow number in the midfield and bottom. France, Germany and Italy has over a 500 medal in thier name, while the lie under the 500 mark. Despite the fact china is now int the bottom part anything could happen in the future years.

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 bar chart illustrate the number of Olympic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrewardgold
medal
 victories by twelve distinct nations. Gold, silver and Bronze are depicted
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different
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colours
.

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see
 USA is the leader of the pack, followed by If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Soviet Union
Soviet union
 and United Kingdom. The Americans leading the table for a massive margin, showing Possible spelling mistake found.theirheartierThaithiefshear
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 dominance in the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Olympic Games
Olympic games
.

USA won over a 2, 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrewardgold
medals
 altogether, including a massive chunk of Gold in the pocket. The If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Soviet Union
Soviet union
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just
 under a 1000 Olympic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrewardgold
medals
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comes
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behind USA
. United Kingdom seals Possible spelling mistake found.theirheartierThaithiefshear
thier
 third place in the chart by sweeping over a 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrewardgold
medals
 in total. Unlike in top, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrewardgold
medal
 difference is a narrow number in the midfield and bottom. France, Germany and Italy has over a 500 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrewardgold
medal
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thier
 name, while the lie under the 500 mark. Despite the fact china is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 int the bottom part anything could happen in the future years. 